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BRAD BIRD
THE INCREDIBLE$
• Seatedin frontof a colored backingis a magnificent masked man in aSuperhero suit:early thirties,ruggedly handsomeand powerfullybuilt, hefiddles with aclip-on microphone.
We're watching afaded DOCUMENTARY,shot in 16mm. A TITLE FADES IN,identifyingthe man asMR. INCREDIBLE.
He finallygetsthe clip securedand settles in.
Incrediblestopstinkering withthe mic and lookstoward CAMERA.He flashes his patentedmegawatt smile.
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wants thepressure of being"Super" all the time?
TITLE CARD:
WALTDISNEY PICTURES PRESENTS
RESUMEDOCUMENTARY: Another striking,masked Superhero,a woman this time.A TITLE identifiesher as ELASTIGIRL.
TITLE CARD:
A PIXARANIMATION STUDIOSFILM
RESUMEDOCUMENTARY: Yet anotherSuperhero, sleek,black, dressed in an ice-bluesuit. SUPER TITLE:FROZONE.
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• likethat. You tellme you're"Super Mega
UltraLightningBabe" ...that'sawright withme. I'm good,I'm good.
• FADE TO BLAC
TITLE:
THE INCREDIBLES
MUNICIBERG- STREETS- MOVING -LATE AFTERNOON
SIRENS WAIL. LightsFLASH. We'reinthe middleof a
classicCAR CHASE:A police car inHOT PURSUIT OF anothe car drivenby armedBANKROBBERS.
The robberriding shotgunprimeshis SUBMACHINEGUN and unloadson the copcar, which SWERVESinto oncoming trafficto avoid thehail of bullets.
INSIDE ANOTHERCAR -NOT FAR AWAY
BOB PARR, adashing,golden-hairedman in hislate twentieslistens tohis radio. Ifhe looks familiar,it' becausehe is the sameman we sawearlier: MR. INCREDIBL
sans maskand Supersuit.Suddenlythe music is
interruptedby anANNOUNCER--
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(CONTINUEJ>)
RADIO
• We interruptfor an importantbulletin:a
deadly high-speedpursuitbetween Police and armedgunmen is underway,traveling northboundon San Pablo Boulevard.
Bob presses abutton. The RADIO flips:convertingto a screenfilledwith a moving aerialmap of thecity streets.He typesin "ISOLATE PURSUIT".2 RED DOTS appear,movingquickly over themap.
He makesa hardright turn. Looksat the screen.A tiny "i"icon (Mr. Incredible'slogo)closes in onthe 2 red dots. He checkshis WATCH--
--andpresses anotherbutton: "AUTODRIVE"andtypes in "MERGEPURSUIT".
Bob takes hishands off the wheeland a rapid seriesof automated actionsbegin: the seatback drops FLAT, the passenger seat foldsagainst thewindow as thedriver's seatslides tothe center.
Bob raises his armsas metal bandslock aroundhis waist, • then SEPARATE, slidingapart towardhis head andhis toes, removing hisclothes toREVEALhis slick,brightly colored MR. INCREDIBLE SUPERSUIT underneath...
He presses anotherbutton: the car'sexteriorCONVERTS intothe coolestretro-futuristicvehicle ever seen:The INCREDIBILE.MR. INCREDIBLE looksup:
THROUGH THE WINDSHIELD
we see an OLD LADYwaving us down.
RESIDENTIAL STREET
Mr. Incredible pullsup. His windowWHOOSHES open.
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Incredibleglancesathis screen:the pursuitis headed
• hisway. He thinks,makingsomequick calculations,then--
RESUMEPURSUIT -SAMEMOMENT
TheCOP CAR pullsbackin behindthe robbers'car. The copsare firingnow andclosing in.
INCREDIBLE&THE CAT TREE
Nervouslycheckingthepursuit onhis videoscreen, Incredibleripsthe treeout ofthe ground.He tips it, leaningit acrosstothe lady justas the CAR CHASE squealsintoview atthe end ofthe block.Incredible seesthis andhastilySHAKESthe tree, tryingto dislodge thecat•
INTERCUT
TheCAR CHASE. Thecarsswerve intoview now,bordering
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thepark thatIncredibleis in. IncredibleSEES themand shakesthe catharder.Chase carsclose in.Incredible. Car chase.The cat. Chase.Cat--
Onefinal SHAKE: Squeakerdropsintothe OLD LADY'S hands.Incredibleraisesthe treeup and SLAMSit down on thehood ofthe crooks'car, squashingit likea bug.
LATER
IncredibleTAMPSdown theloosedirt at thebase of the freshlyreplantedtreeand smilesat his admirers.
COP #1 Thankyou, Mr. Incredible,you'vedoneit again.
COP #2 Yeah,you're thebest.
• thevicinity ofParadiseand Solano--
IncredibleFROWNS and looksat hiswatch. He makesa • calculation,mutteringto himself.
I'vestill got time. (givingeach admirera nod) Officers,Ma'am ..."Squeaker."
He jumps intothe INCREDIBILE andisstartled tofind a pudgy kidwearing a maskand a homemadeSuperherocostume sitting inthe passengerseat.
Mr. Incrediblestareswarily at theawkwardly costumed kid. He's startingto lookfamiliar...
The passengerdoor WHOOSHESopen and "IncrediBoy"is ejected fromthe car. Incrediblefiresthe afterburners and peelsoff, leavingBuddy standingalone.
CITY ROOFTOPS- MINUTESLATER
A trail ofstolen goodsscattered acrossa rooftopleads us to a THIEF.He muttersto himselfas he rootsthrough a stolen purse,disregardingsome items,stuffingothers into his pockets.A SHADOWlooms onthe wall behindhim.
The snatcherLOOKSUP. Incrediblegrins.
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Incredibleclosesin on him.The snatcherdrops the purse,pulls a gun.An ARM suddenlySTRETCHESinto frame anddelivers a rightcrossto the snatcher'sjaw-- knockinghim OUT COLD.
Incrediblelooksup and seesa dazzlingMASKED WOMANin an equallydazzlingsuit. SheSMILES.
Elastigirlmovesto the snatcher,beginsto pick himup--
• ELASTIGIRL
Sure you'vegot him. Ijust took himout for you.
Elastigirlassesseshim. Slowlymoves closer.
MR. INCREDIBLE
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What everhappened to"equal tr.eatment"?
CONTINUED: (2)
Elastigirlcoldcocksthe crook withone stretchedpunch.
Elastigirlsmiles, movesvery closeto Incredible.
In one fluidmotion sheLOOPS aroundhis body,suddenly behind himand beforehe can turn--back in frontagain.
She makesa little stutterstep tothe edge ofthe roof and jumps,flips, loopsand STRETCHESacrossthe rooftops like a liquidcat, disappearingintothe settingsun.
MR. INCREDIBLE letsouta low whistle.That.Is a woman.
MOMENTSLATER
Incrediblehandcuffsthe purse-snatcherto apipe.
Incredibleturns. A HELICOPTER sweepspast,machineguns blazing backtowardsits pursuer.FROZONEswoops down, hot on itstail, surfinga sheetof ice thatmaterializes in his path.
MR. INCREDIBLE
• Frozone!
Frozone LEAPS, grabbingonto oneof the chopper'sskids.
Incrediblefrowns, glancingathis watch.He yells atthe retreatingcopter.
Offscreena woman screams--
Incredibleruns tothe edge ofthe buildingand looks down. A largecrowdis gatheredon the streetsbelow. Incrediblefollowstheir upwardsgaze to theroof ofa skyscraper,where aman standspoised to jump--
--then DOES. Incrediblequicklygagesdistances,andthen dives offthe edge,making a spectacularLEAP--
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HIGH ABOVETHE STREET
--and TACKLESthe jumperin mid-air.Theycrash through an enormouswindowon the farside--
INSIDE BANKBUILDING -LOBBYAREA
--and tumbleto thefloor in ashower of glass.Safe.
Mr. Incredibleslidesthe jumperover to adesk andprops him up againstit.His acute sensesturnhis attentionto the hallway,towardthe elevators.As he followshisears we becomeaware ofa sound: atiny seriesof regular BEEPS. INCREDIBLElocatesa spoton thewall and presses one ear againstit.The BEEPS ACCELERATE.Bob startsto push awayand--
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--BOOOOOOOM! • Thehallway is filledwith smokeand debris.A SILHOUETTE emergesfrom thenewly blownhole in thewall; atall, rangyman in a mime costumecarryingtwostuffedduffle bags.He surveysthe scenewith a wickedsmile.
A VAULTDOORis embedded intothe walldirectly opposite thehole. It movesaside, revealingIncrediblebehindit, dazedbut unharmed.He seesthe mime andGROWLS.
VOICE And-- INCREDIBOY!
BothMr. Incredibleand Voyageturn andstare in disbeliefat thekid, who awkwardlyfliesover tothem.
Thereis an uglyflash inBuddy's eyes.
CONTINUED: (2)
As Buddy jogsto theshattered window,Incrediblesees that Voyagehas clippeda SMALLBOMBonto Buddy'scape.
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He grabsBuddy's capejust as "INCREDIBOY"TAKESOFF, taking Incrediblewithhim.
ABOVEMUNICIBERG -MOVING - NIGHT
INCREDIBLE& THE BOY rocketwildlyout of control, sprayingsparks in everydirection,Mr. I grabbingat the cape desperatelyforthe bomb.
INCREDIBLE finallygrabshold ofthe bomb andflings it free. Bothhe and theBOMBfall onto the elevatedtrain tracksbelow. Thebomb EXPLODES, blowingawaya large sectionof track. IncrediblegroggilyLOOKSUP:
A TRAIN iscoming.And heading straightforthe section of trackthat is NO LONGERTHERE.
Incrediblesets his jawand starts runningtoward the oncoming train,leapingthe chasm tointercept thetrain • before itgets there.
He pullsup and plantshimself. Theexpression onhis face saysit all: thisis going to hurt.
The trainHITS-- Mr. Incredibletakingthe full impact. Rail tiesbreak behind Incredible'sfeet,sprayingin all directionsas Incredible--miraculously--wrestlesthe train toa stop.
STREETS BELOWTRESTLE- LATER
Police andParamedicshave arrived,cordoning offthe accident sceneand treatingthe injured.Mr. Incredible hands Buddyover to thepolice.
The copsshove Buddy intothe backseatof their car.
MR. INCREDIBLE BUDDY
Well, yeah.Skippy here IncrediBoy! made sureof that.
A tinyALARM sounds. Incrediblecheckshis wristwatch.
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MR. INCREDIBLE (CONT'D)
• Holy smokes ..•I'mlate.Listen, I've
gotta be somewhere--
He signalsthe Incredibilewith aremote. It roarsinto view,squeals to astop next tohim.
He firesthe afterburners.The copswatch in dismayas the Incredibileroarsoff.
A DOWNTOWNCATHEDRAL
The INCREDIBILE pullsupin front,CONVERTINGback into a sedan.
INSIDE CATHEDRALLOBBY
Mr.Incredible ENTERS, dressedsmartlyin a tux,fumbling withhis tie.
LUCIUS BEST/FROZONE You're verylate.
BOB/MR. INCREDIBLE Is the nightstill young?How do I look?
Hisbest man LUCIUS (akaFROZONE)stops him beforehe ...
LUCIUS/FROZONE The mask!You've still gotthe mask--
Bestreaches up andpulls off hisMr. Incrediblemask. Bob takesa deepbreath and pushesopen the chapeldoors--
BOB/MR. INCREDIBLE Showtime--!
CHAPEL
Bob theGroom standsat the altarwith his Bride,HELEN, who we quicklyrealizeis alsoELASTIGIRL.
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REVEREND
• RobertGolden,do you takeHelen Truaxto
beyour lawfulwedded wife...(etc.)
HELEN/ELASTIGIRL (low,to Bob) Cuttingit kindof close, don'chathink?
BOB/MR. INCREDIBLE You needto bemore ••."flexible."
HELEN/ELASTIGIRL I loveyou, butif we're goingto make thiswork, you'vegotta bemore than Mr. Incredible.You know that,don'tyou?
BOB/MR. INCREDIBLE Ido.
They kiss.A crowd ofSUPERHEROEScheer fromthe pews.
VIDEO FOOTAGE: anANCHORWOMANreportsfrom anews desk.A CHYRON displaysthevisage of MR. INCREDIBLE.
FILM FOOTAGE:OUTSIDE THE COURTHOUSE
Sansweet'sLAWYER standsnext tohim on thecrowded front steps, andspeaks toa cluster ofREPORTERS.
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• pain.
Thecrowd STIRS asa business-suitedMR.INCREDIBLE appearsand pointsa threateningfingerat Sansweet.
MR. INCREDIBLE SANSWEET I savedyour life! You ruinedmy death!
MR.INCREDIBLE INCREDIBLE'S ATTORNEY Listenyou littlepiece of-- (cutshim off) My clienthas no further comment atthis time!
FILM FOOTAGE:SHOTS ofthetrain accidentscene.
FILM FOOTAGE:SHOTS ofa courtroomfilledwith neck- bracedtrain-wreckvictims.A lawyer goesthroughhis paces,oftengesturing towarda gloweringMR. INCREDIBLE.
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floodgatesfor dozensof similarlawsuits againstSuperheroesthe worldover.
A SERIES OF SPINNING NEWSPAPERHEADLINES
describingthesuccessionof lawsuitsbrought against Superheroes:"DynaGuysued!","'SUPER'DAMAGES!", "X-RAY VISIONPEEPINGTOM?"
IrateTaxpayersdemonstrate,waving placardsthatread: "NO MORESUPER BAILOUTS!","$UPER EXPEN$IVE!",etc.
FILM FOOTAGE:A CONGRESSMANaddresseshis colleaguesfrom thefloor ofthe House ofRepresentatives.
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SuperheroRelocationProgram.
FILM FOOTAGE:SUPERHEROESEXITING thepublic stage--as they wavegoodbye (alaNixon), duckinto cars ina shower of poppingflashbulbs,cheered by supporters,jeeredby opponents,etc.
FILM FOOTAGE:A throngof peoplemill about thecity streetsin diverseanonymity.
The MUSIC crescendoesascamera LIFTS UP tothehorizon and thesun streamingthrough theclouds.
EXTREMECLOSEUP: AN INSURANCEFORM
A STAMPslams down,leaving theword "DENIED" inred ink.