O'Neil moves over to the wheeled vehicle, lifting off the
last crate. He reaches into his pocket and produces 4
strange looking TOOL. Kawalsky enters.
KAWALSKY
Base. camo is up, Sir.
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CONTINUED: 114
O'Neil cooly palms the tool, hiding 1t and turns around. He
nads aprovingly to Kawalsky.
KAWALSKY (cont'd)
I want to apologize for losing my cool. There's just so much happening here that I don't understand...
O'NEIL
So what?
KAWALSKY
[It‘s just...
O'NEIL
Apology accepted. Dismissed.
Kawalsky snaps to, and exits. Once gone, O'Neil takes the
tool, placing it into the floor boards of the vehicle. As he
maneuvers the tool, a section of the floor COMES OFF,
revealing a hidden compartment below. O'*Ne1l reaches in and
removes two heavy, SOPHISTICATED LOOKING DEVICES.
Placing the Devices on the floor, he adjusts something on
them, connecting the two pieces together. Joined, he opens
a common LID, exposing a small button.
As he presses it, a square electrical “KEY“ POPS UP. O'Neil
pockets the “KEY" and shuts the lid, locking 1t.
BASE CAMP 115
Daniel struggles up the last few steps of the hill He DROPS
his cargo down, with a THUD. Irritated, Ferettl1 rushes over
and opens the box, revealing DOZENS OF WEAPONS. Feretti
checks the weapons for damage.
Daniel wioes his brow staring up at the multi-Suns. One by
one, Daniel goes through the many pockets of his vest,
casually tossing aside their contents as he searches for
something. The last pocket emptied, Daniel gives up.
DANIEL
Great. Everything but sun block.
Feretti replaces a pistol back in the box and turns toward
Daniel, disgusted.
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FERETTI
Don't you have something you should be doing?
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Ferett: lifts a large anffel and HEAVES it at Daniel,
knocking him over. The duffel roils from his hands and all
his BOOKS go TUMBLING DOWN tne other side of the dune.
Feretti: smiles toa Brown as Daniel reluctantiy gets up and
climbs down tne dune after his belongings.
LOWER DUNE - CONTINUOUS
Daniel makes 115 way clumsily down the sand, his books are
scattered everywhere. As he reaches over to pick up the
empty duffel, he SEES...
HOOF PRINTS
in the sand. Oeep set prints, walking around the next dune.
Daniel can't selieve it. Slowiy he follows the tracks.
BASE CAMP - SAME
O'Neil arrives carrying the last crate. He looks around,
turns to Feretti.
O’NEIL
Where's Jackson?
The Soldiers exchange a glance.
FERETTI
He dropped his stuff. I thank he went to pick it up.
Feretti points in cane direction Daniel went. O'Ne1l signals
Brown and Kawalsky to follow hain.
LOWER DUNE - CONTINUOUS
O'Ne1l finds the books and bag scattered down the sand.
Across from 1t several tracks, the beasts‘ and Daniel's.
O'Neil shoots @ disapproving look over to his men.
SAND DUNES - SAME
As Daniel reaches the top of the next dune he sees something.
He crouches low, not to be seen.
DANIEL’'S P.O.V. - MASTADGE
Climbing beyond the next dune we SEE a large harry BEAST. A
strange cross between a Mammoth and a Buffalo, (called a
MASTADGE}. Daniel is awestruck.
Cauticusly Daniel makes his way towards it. He notices
gomething on the head and neck of the Mastadge; A HARNESS.
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je reaches xnto nis pocket and pulls out a SNICKERS BAR. He
peeis 12 and snows it to the Mastaage.
DANIEL
Huncory?
ith its great nostrils, the Mastadge SNIFFS the air. Slowly
she aaa moves closer to Daniel. Carefully, Daniel lifts 7 tne par, closer to the animal's mouth. We RACK FOCUS To:
ANGLE - O'NEZL, BROWN AND KAWALSRY 122
As they come aver the top of the next dune, spott:ng Daniel.
Xawalsky ana Srown lift their weapons.
O'NEILL
Don <= feea it!
Daniel turns, sees O'Neil but ignores him. The Mastadge
sticks cut 2t5S MASSIVE TONGUE and LICKS the Snickers Bar.
Vaniel, nervous, drops the bar. The Mastadge leans down and
picks it up with its teeth. Daniel smiles, reaches out and *
PETS the Mastadge. Daniel turns to O'Neil, yells over to
hin.
_ DANIEL
Look, it‘s got a harnese. It's
domesticated. See?
Daniel lifts one of the reins attached to the harness and
shows it to O'Neil. O'’Ne1l signals his men to lower their
rifies.
DANIEL (CONT'D)
You‘re a good old boy, aren't you.
The beast seems to respond. Daniel smiles as he runs his
hand over the Mastadge's head. But when Daniel's hand
touches the Deasts EARS, 1t REARS UP, ROARING.
The Mastadge JUMPS UP onto its back legs. His reins gets
caught around Daniel's leg. Screaming the Mastadge KICKS and
TAKES OFF RUNNING! Daniel gets DRAGGED OFF along with the
beast.
O'Neil and the Lieutenants lift their weapons but «he animal
1s too FAST. They watch as Daniel gets DRAGGED up and over
the next sand dune DISAPPEARING from sight.
KAWALSKY
(yelling) =
Let go of it!
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Frustratea, =ney iower cheir guns and take off after them.
ANGLE - DANIEL AND MASTADGE 123
Janiel :S ORAGGED, screaming as ne’s pulled. Twisting and
Dumping. His mouth filling with sana.
ANGLE - O’NETL, KAWALSRY AND BROWN 124
Huffing and puffing as they climb the top of the next dune.
Getting Daniei pack in sight, they SEE how fast the Mastadge
is.
WIDE SHOT - DESERT 125
Daniel is PULLED AWAY farther and farther from O'Neil who
cnase from benind. No match for che speeding beast, the
aQistance ocetween them grows.
OMITTED 126
O'NEIL, BROWN AND KAWALSKY 127
Come running over a dune, guns raised. Suddenly they slow *
down as they SEE Daniel, laying in a heap, the Mastadge
standing over him. They keep their weapons trained on the *
beast as they approach trom a distance.
ANGLE - DANTEL AND MASTADGE 126
Daniel spats out a mouthful of sand as the Mastadge leans
over and begins to LICK HIS FACE.
DANIEL
Argh! Get your stinking breath away from met
(yelling back to O'Neil)
Somebody help me!
Finally O'Neil and his men arrive, but to Oaniel‘s surprise,
O'Neil PASSES right by him, lowering his gun.
Daniel looks up, spits out the sand in his mouth. He standa
up and he and the others join O'Neil at a nearby ledge. de
finally sees what O'Neil sees...
DANIEL'S P.O.V. - TEN THOUSAND PEOPLE 129
Thousands of dark skinned PEOPLE populating the dune valleys
below. Humans, like on Earth, seemingly out of place and
time.
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CONTINUED: 123
At the base of huge duneS we see gigantic MINING PITS. *
Covered with thick DUST, their faces barely recognizable as *
human.
ANGLE - DANIEL AND THE OTHERS 130
Amazed, trey can’t believe what they're seeing. O'Neil lifts *
a pair of binoculars, scanning the area.
O'NEIL'S 2.0.V. - THROUGH BINOCULARS - MINING AREA 130A
Spread across the sands, we SEE these people involved in hack *
breaking Labor. Suddenly a worker in the foreground turns
and loak DIRECTLY AT US.
Instantly Xawalsky and 3rown droop down, guns ready. O'Neil,
still stazaing with Daniel, Lowers his glasses :iust as he
SEES...
The workers ail start LOOKING UP, spotting them. The news
SPREADS and more and more workers put down their tools and
turn to tre hillside. Several of the groups crowd closer,
gtariag up at the strange visitors.
O'Neil moves down the dune towards them. Daniel follows.
Kawalsky and Brown, still on the ground, exchange a glance,
then reluctantly follow.
GROUPS OF WORKERS 132
Gathering tagether, moving closer. As they assemble thay
grow quiet, reverent. The team cautiously makes their way
down the sloping hillside in the tense silence.
WIDE SHOT - THOUSANDS OF WORKERS 132
All staring over at our crew as they arrive just a few yards
in front of the assembled crowd.
O'NEIL
{under his breath) " Okay, Daniel. You're on. DAN TEL Me? O' NEIL
Talk to them.
Daniel has no idea what to do. Slowly he walks over, a
forced smile for the crowd. He steps up cloge to a MUDDY
WORKER.
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The Worker looks at him with curiosity. Daniel opens his
mouth about to try and speak when suddenly a FLASH of
reflected LIGHT shines off of the Golden Sun Disk around
Daniel’s neck.
The Worker SEES this and his eyes widen. He SCREAMS
something out, frightening our crew and silencing Daniel.
All at once, the entire assembly in a wave-like chain
reaction BOWS DOWN, FLAT ON THE FLOOR.
KAWALSKY
(whispered)
What did he say?
O'NEIL
I don't know.
They take a few steps closer to Daniel.
O’ NEIL
What the hell did you teli then,
Jackson?
Daniel turns back to O'Neil, nervous and confused.
DANIEL
Nothing.
O'NEILL
Try to communicate.
DANIEL
How?
Frustrated O'Neil steps forward. He singles out one of the
workers, a young boy, SKAARA, sixteen. O’Ne1l extends his
hand. Skaara only looks at 1t with mounting fright.
Frustrated, O'Neil GRABS Skaara‘s hand, shaking ic.
Skaara SCREAMS OUT in fear and takes off RUNNING. O'Neil
turns to Daniel, confused.
DANIEL
So much for communication.
O'Neil shoots him a iook. Behind them, Brown leans over one
of the pi.es of minerals stacked nearby. He lowers a device
over 1b, taking readings. Kawalsky's attention is diverted
to something far away.
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DECORATED “MASTADGE AND ENTOURAGE 133
An elaborately decorated Mastadge with a coverea carriage on
top marches througn the gathered workers, a small entourage
surrounding it. Among them, Skaara, who looks up to the
carriage, speaking quickly.
It makes 17S way througn the crowd over to Daniel and the
others. It stops and an elderly man, KASUF, the tribe priest
steps down =rom the carriage and KNEELS before Daniel. His
head bowea, Xasuf speaks very FAST and with reverence.
DANIEL
I can't make 1t out. Sounds familiar. A bit like Berber, or
maybe Chadic, or Omotic. I can't
cell.
Finally, wnen done, Kasut STANDS again. This time the ENTIRE
CROWD stances with him, as thougn a orayer nad endea. Daniel
looks at O'Neil.
O'NEIL
Don't look at me.
Kasuf signais a group of WOMEN who approach carrying large
water basins. SARI, twenty, beautiful and painfully shy,
steps forward and offers some water to Daniel.
Daniel is stunned, smitten. Slowly he accepts a drink. She
humbly bows her head and them moves on to Kawalsky. Kasuf
steps forward, again, speaking quickly. Asking a question.
Captivatec oy Sari, it takes Daniei a second to snap out of
ut. He aoesn't know how to respond. An idea hits him and he
digs into -:s pocket and retrieves another Snickers Bar.
Daniel waiss over to Kasuf, peeling the bar.
In a ceremonial gesture, Daniel hands the bar over to Kasuf
who reluctantly takes it. Hesitantly, he takes bite. He
likes the caste and smiles.
KASUF
Bonniwae. is
Daniel is tnrilled. Ye smiles back at him.
DANIEL
Bonniwae.
KAWALSKY
What does that mean?
DANIEL
I have no idea.
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Pleasea at communicating with Daniel, Kasut waves his arms
unvitingly towards the direction from which he came.
DANIEL
He's inviting us to go with him.
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KAWALSKY
What makes you so sure?
Daniel exaggeratedly repeats Kasuf‘s gesture. #veryone turns
to the Colonel for a decision. He makes none. He just
stares at the departing Kasuf, considering.
DANIEL
Weren't we looking for signs of civilization? Obviously we've found it. You want me to get us back home? This is my best shot.
BROWN
Colonel, he's right. I took some reading on what they're mining. Tt's the same material as the Star Gate.
Looking at the faces of the mud covered workers, O'Neil
finally makes a decision.
O'NEIL
Radio back to base camp. Tell them to keep the area secured until we return.
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