EXT. STREETS - CONTINUOUS - NIGHT
Current Revisions by
Mike Finch and Alex Litvak
Ragged BREATHING over it, rising in intensity and volume. Heart POUNDING, POUNDING, POUNDING, like a jackhammer, threatening to tear itself out of the rib cage.
And a voice, calm, measured, eerily juxtaposed against the rest of the soundtrack.
VOICE (V.O.) The jungle creed says the strongest feed on any prey they can. And I was branded beast at every feast before I ever became a man.
WHAM, the first shot of the movie assaults us in the form of a man EXPLODING into frame -- powerful, dangerous, the kind of cat who can kill you with a hard look. But now he’s scared, running as if hell itself was behind him.
Around him a nameless city towers like a concrete jungle.
With the fugitive, moving, handheld, frenetic, jarring, echoing his state of mind.
PREDATOR POV: The prey in infrared, seen from above.
The man glances back, sees nothing -- redoubles his already punishing pace.
Turns the corner -- left or right, split second to decide -- he goes left -- powers along the street, arms pumping like pistons, shoes SLAPPING the shit out of the pavement, a staccato rhythm -- trips, falls -- staggers back on his feet, using a chainlink fence for purchase.
SOMETHING LUNGES AT HIM FROM THE SHADOWS ON THE OTHER SIDE!
A leashed pitbull -- its jaws SNAP a few inches away from our guy’s face.
He reels, gun up -- the hound SNARLS, trying to get at the intruder -- but whatever is chasing him is much worse -- he recovers, rushes away, an adrenaline-powered juggernaut, the dog’s BARK chasing him like a stream of obscenities.
Alley, alley, dead end, shit! He spins, scanning for exits, there are none, double shit, about to backtrack--
In the distance the dog abruptly SHUTS UP.
He freezes. Back against the wall. Pistol pointed at the mouth of the alley, held in a shaky grip. The look of a man about to face a six foot spider with a toothpick.
Street light BUZZES, flickering in and out of existence. An unsettling strobing effect.
The man waits, sucking air, finger on the trigger... waits... waits...
Nothing.
He relaxes just a bit.
WHAM, he’s JERKED upward as if plucked by an invisible hand.
Make it a noose. He dangles from it, losing the gun in the process, tips of his toes scraping the ground. A liquid, brown and viscous, SPLASHES from above, drenching him.
He chokes. FOOTSTEPS. The hunter approaches. We fully expect to see Predator...
Guess again. Or rather it is a predator of a different kind.
Call him ROYCE. A Steve McQueen face, hard but not unhandsome. Barely broke a sweat. Takes off Raptor infrared goggles.
The man stares at him, eyes wide with terror. GURGLING. Mouth trying to form words that never come.
It doesn’t matter. Royce’s heard it all before. The voice from the opening shot:
He lights a match against his finger. Tosses it into the spreading puddle. Walks away without looking back.
WHOOSH! The man lights up like a bonfire. SCREAMS as he burns alive.
Royce keeps walking.
POP, POP, POP, lights BLOW out in quick succession.
Royce spins, sensing something coming up from behind a split second before--
IMPACT. SMASH TO BLACK. Blood red letters.
PREDATORS
An ocean of white. A body PLUMMETS toward it, almost peaceful, a fallen angel...
TEARS through the clouds.
Just like the nightmare we’ve all had.
Except this. IS. FUCKING. HAPPENING.
Reality is a washer/dryer in a spin cycle. With each rotation we catch a glimpse of blue above, a vast expanse of green below, the latter closing fast.
An altimeter of foreign design is hooked to a harness crossing Royce’s chest. LED flashes in a degrading sequence... a countdown... and then the thing cracks!
Parachute deploys with a POP. Much like the altimeter that triggered its release, its design is unfamiliar to us.
Royce goes from terminal velocity to 30 in less than a second, deceleration jerking him up. Jungle looms. IMPACT.