[Note: the following sequence will take place in ONE SHOT.]
We're moving through the crowd, headed towards our people.
As we APPROACH, we can hear LILY'S PAINED CRIES. Rob's
holding her tight in his arms -- she's sobbing hysterically
We can hear Hud trying to catch his breath. As he gets
close, we see Lily nearly BUCKLE in Rob's arms -- it's as
though her legs give out entirely -- between SOBS --
LILY
-- what was that -- what was that
Marlena tries to help -- but Lily's a wreck she pushes
Marlena and Rob away -- backs against the wall behind her
holds her head in her hands -- the TEARS nearly choking her --
LILY
-- please -- what happened -- somebody please tell me what happened --
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Hud angles the camera towards Rob. He's taken a few steps
away. He's staring forward. Blank expression on his face.
There's something EERIE about it -- he's so deeply IN SHOCK
that he seems to have disconnected from the world entirely.
Chirp. We hear a noise. It's a quick beep, barely audible.
In fact, nobody even reacts to it.
LILY
-- it just came from nowhere -- he didn't see it -- he didn't even see it - - he was there and then he was gone --
(through sobs)
What was that? What just happened ...
Marlena crouches next to Lily
MARLENA
I don't know ... I don't know ...
Hud angles back TOWARDSROB -- he's still standing in the
middle of the street. With THAT LOOK on his face -- it's as
though he's completely short-circuited.
HUD (0.S.)
(trying to catch his breath)
Rob -- Rob -- I'm sorry -- I'm so sorry --
But Rob doesn't respond. Chirp. We hear THAT SOUND again.
HUD (O.S.)
Rob -- are you okay, man? Rob?
Rob doesn't say a thing. Just stands there. Shell-shocked.
HUD (O.S.)
Rob?
CRASH! Just then, the sound of a WINDOWSHATTERING jolts
Hud. He swings the camera --
ACROSS THE STREET -- we see SEVERAL PEOPLE kicking in the
door of a corner ELECTRONICS STORE. LOOTERS immediately
storm the place --
Hud swings the camera back to the group -- Marlena's glancing
out at the CHAOS building in the streets. She looks at Hud --
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MARLENA
We can't stay here ...
Chirp. There's that sound again. Hud swings the camera back
towards Rob --
HUD (O.S.)
Rob ... we gotta get moving. It's not safe here. We gotta --
(trying to think)
I don't know. We could go up, try the Williamsburg ... Or try to cross to the other side ... try the Tunnel or something -- I don't know. L don't know --
(beat)
But she's right -- we can't stay here -- we gotta do something ...
Chirp. Hud HOLDS ON ROB. It's not even clear if Rob's
hearing Hud right now --
HUD (O.S.)
What do we do, Rob?
AROUND THEM -- we can hear the distant sounds of people's
SCREAMS; the dull thudding of what sounds like EXPLOSIONS
Chirp. There it is again. Only this time --
Rob seems to recognize it. In fact, the sound seems to roust
him slightly. He glances down, reaches into his pocket
And pulls out his phone. As he flips it open, realizes
ROB
(almost to himself)
There's a message ...
Rob hits a button on his phone, trying to playback but then --
Chirp. Rob tenses as he realizes THAT NOISE he's been
hearing is the sound of his battery dying --
ROB
No --
He tries to dial again, but -- Ch-chirp. The phone DIES
OUTRIGHT.
ROB
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We hear his breath catch in his throat -- PANICbuilding in
his chest as he tries to hold himself together.His eyes
dart up, glances around -- what do I do ... whatdo I do ...
And then, suddenly, without warning
Rob turns and starts walking away.
HUD (O.S.)
Rob -- ?
It's like he's in a trance. We can hear Rob mutter to
himself as he passes Hud
ROB
My phone's dead ...
Hud swings the camera towards Marlena and Lily. Marlena's
looking at Rob in disbelief --
MARLENA
Where are you going?
(glances at Hud)
What's he doing?
Hud turns to FOLLOW ROB. But Rob's moving fast, making a
beeline right towards the ELECTRONICS STORE. As Hud hurries
to catch up, we see LOOTERS emerging from the store --
Two guys are carrying a FLATSCREEN TELEVISION.Another
person is racing out with a STEREO. Rob walksright by them.
Doesn't even seem to notice.
HUD (O.S.)
Rob, what are you doing? Wait --
As they approach the entrance --
HUD (0.S.)
Uh Rob ... this store's closed.
Rob walks right inside, passing looters on the way out. Hud
hesitates for a moment, then follows his friend --
A91 INT. ELECTRONICS STORE - NIGHT A91
-- inside the store. As Rob makes his way down the aisles,
passing looters.
HUD (O.S.)
Rob -- seriously --
They pass SEVERAL TELEVISIONS mounted on the wall --
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HUD (O.S.)
We shouldn't be h--
And Hud stops in his tracks, angles towards the TELEVISIONS
as he realizes --
There are NEWSCASTS playing on the screens.
ON THE FIRST TELEVISION -- we see FOOTAGE of the BROOKLYN
BRIDGE. A news shot shows us a GIANT HOLE torn right through
the center of the structure.
But it's the SECOND TELEVISION that catches Hud's
attention ...
THE NEWS BANNER reads: "CREATURE ATTACKS NEW YORK."
ON THE SCREEN: a helicopter shot islooking down on the city,
through the alleys of SKYSCRAPERS.And there, behind one of
the buildings, is --
THE MONSTER.
It's hard to make it out clearly -- it's dark, we get the sense the helicopters don't want to get too close. But as their spotlights flare across it, we see enough to know
That's a creature, all right. It's ABSOLUTELY ENORMOUS as
big as the skyscrapers aroundit, if not BIGGER. Its massive
body scrapes against a nearbybuilding, sending DEBRIS
EVERYWHERE --
HUD (O.S.)
Oh jesus ...
RUMBLE. Hud jerks, surprised, and swings the camera towards
the front of the store --
THROUGH THE DOORS -- we can see a convoy of MILITARY HUMVEES
and TROOP TRANSPORTS racing past us down the street
Hud swings the camera back TOWARDS THE TELEVISIONS. We see A
LOOTER has stopped whatever he was doing and is now watching
the television with HUD --
On the first screen we see a FIELD REPORTER standing
behind what looks like a MILITARY BLOCKADE --
On the second screen -- the helicopter's angling around,
trying to get a better vantage point of the MONSTER. Hud
reaches forward, TURNS THE VOLUME UP on both screens --
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SECOND SCREEN (V.O.)
confirm only that it emerged from the waters south of Manhattan a little over --
FIELD REPORTER
currently in the process of evacuating the city, hoping to contain the creature to the Baxter/Bayard area --
Hud glances over at the Looter next to him --
HUD (O.S.)
That's not far -- that's only like, what, twenty, twenty-five blocks from here ...
The Looter just glances at him, nods. As the NEWSCASTS
continue, Hud turns back towards the front doors. Curiosity
getting the best of him, he heads --
B91 EXT. STREETS - NIGHT B91
-- back OUTSIDE. DOWNTHE STREET -- we see a CONVOY of
military vehicles -- they're rolling slowly towards us,
HERDING PEOPLE away from the north part of the city
A VOICE barks orders over a TRANSPORT'S LOUDSPEAKER
LOUDSPEAKER
continue south -- no citizens will be allowed north of Canal for any reason --
Hud heads towards them, ducks round the corner. Angles the
camera DOWNTHE STREET --
IN THE DISTANCE -- we can see the same HELICOPTER
SEARCHLIGHTS we saw on the NEWSCASTS. We recognize one of
the SKYSCRAPERS; we see the same TRAILS OF DEBRIS snaking up
into the sky. We hear the faint RUMBLINGS of the buildings
shaking -- the noise has almost become commonplace --
Hud ZOOMS IN, we CATCH A GLIMPSE of movement behind the
skyscraper. It looks like the GHOSTLY WHITE SILHOUETTE of
the creature; one of the SPOTLIGHTS hits it just as
THE MONSTER'S TAIL whips up above the skyscrapers.
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Hud GASPS. Behind him, we hear the military convoy getting
closer, the LOUDSPEAKER BLARING. Hud turns, hurries round
the corner, and back into --
C91 INT. ELECTRONICS STORE - NIGHT C91
-- the store. DOWNTHE AISLES, towards the back of the
store, we can see Rob tossing aside boxes of CELL PHONES and
ACCESSORIES as he searches for the right battery --
HUD (O.S.)
Rob we don't want to be here right Dml
But Rob doesn't even look up -- he's intense, on a mission.
As Hud hurries down the aisle towards him --
He passes the TELEVISIONS. And a few more LOOTERS are now
watching the screens with RAPT ATTENTION. Hud can't help
himself -- he glances towards the screens
ON THE FIRST SCREEN -- the helicopter has angled a little
closer -- we see THE MONSTER'S BACK -- it's HUNCHEDOVER,
seems to be rubbing its body against a building We hear a
COMMENTATOR'SVOICE. He sounds a bit flummoxed
COMMENTATOR(O.S.)
-- at this point, everything is pure speculation --
ON THE SECOND SCREEN -- we see a MILITARY OFFICER trying to
move the FIELD REPORTER away from the BLOCKADE. She's trying
to finish her report --
FIELD REPORTER
-- will not comment on the course of action, but it's clear there's a sizable mobilization of
Hud angles back towards the FIRST SCREEN. The HELICOPTER
SHOT has zoomed in a bit. We can see what looks like FLAKES
OF SKIN falling off the monster's back
COMMENTATOR(O.S.)
perhaps some sort of symbiotic relationship with the creature. A parasite, if you will --
The shot ZOOMS IN, following a flake down to the ground. And
as the flake hits the street ... it MOVES.
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ANCHOR (O.S.)
OH -- whatever it is, it's moving
The image is blurry, but we can see PIXELATED MOVEMENTas the
spider-like parasite skitters across the ground. We see it
race towards the MILITARY PERIMETER --
ON THE SECOND SCREEN -- we see the camera SHAKE as GUNFIRE
rings out --
ON THE FIRST SCREEN -- the parasite LAUNCHES ITSELF at the
soldier ... WWWSSHHLLK!! The soldier SCREAMS -- though the
image is blurry, we get the sense that something VIOLENT and
HORRIBLE is happening to him --
COMMENTATOR(O.S.)
Oh my god
And the first screen ABRUPTLY CUTS to the NEWS STUDIO. The
Anchorman, unprepared, stares back at the camera, stunned --
ANCHOR
(horrified)
Uh ...
ON THE SECOND SCREEN -- we can HEAR the FIELD REPORTER
SCREAMING, and then it also CUTS to STANDBY FOOTAGE --
MARLENA (0. S.)
What are you guys doing?
Hud swings the camera to FIND MARLENA as she pulls Lily
through the front doors --
MARLENA
We have to get out of here -- like, now. Where's --
(sees over Hud's shoulder)
Rob!
They hurry RIGHT PAST HUD. He turns to follow them. In the
back of the store, we SEE ROB tearing open a CELL PHONE
PACKAGE. He yanks out the battery
MARLENA
Rob -- we gotta go. The military's evacuating this whole place
Rob slamsthe battery into his phone. Checks the signal --
it's good. He turns, moves towards the back corner. Where
it's quiet. Marlena throws a glance towards Hud --
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HUD (O.S.)
Don't look at me -- I've tried --
MARLENA
Rob -- it's the army and that thing's right over --
Rob flashes Marlena a look that stops her in her tracks --
ROB
Quiet.
Rob hits a button, holds the phone to his ear. Tries to
listen. Looks frustrated -- this isn't working.
He holds the phone down, hits a button. Cranks up the
volume. We realize -- he's putting it on SPEAKERPHONE
There's a moment of silence -- Rob, Hud, Lily, and Marlena
all stare at the phone, waiting in tense anticipation, then
BEEP -- the message starts playing
And BETH'S VOICE fills the air --
BETH
(over phone)
Rob -- Rob I can't -- oh god -- I can't move --
She sounds PANICKED, HYSTERICAL
BETH
(over phone)
Rob -- it fell -- my apartment -- the whole wall fell on me --
Hud's ANGLING IN ON ROB as Beth's message plays --
BETH
(over phone)
I can't I'm bleeding and L can't move
C-CRACK -- Just then, A VIOLENT SOUND rings out over the
phone -- it sounds like concrete tearing in half -- Beth
SCREAMS -- we hear her PANICKED BREATHING as she gasps --
BETH
(overphone)
Oh god Rob -- Rob -- ROB
And it CUTS OUT.
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We're CLOSE ON ROB as the message ends. As we HOLD ON HIM,
we can see it all play out on his face as he stares at the
phone the HORROR at what he's just heard, the building
PANIC in his chest, the overwhelming sense of HELPLESSNESS
Nobody says a word. Nobody knows what to say.
And Rob? He just stares at that phone. We see his jaw
clench, we get the sense he's fighting off tears, his
breathing becomes more and more desperate ...
But then, after a few beats ... something changes in Rob.
We see him fight it all off -- it's as though he doesn't
allow himself to panic. Right there, on the spot, he makes
up his mind. Knows what he has to do. We see it WASH OVER
HIM -- Rob sets his jaw, glances up at Hud ...
As Rob stares at us, we see COLD RESOLVE in his eyes, and --
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