The back room of the barber shop is a small, dingy place, one
bulb, barred windows, a door to a tiny bathroon. FOUR
DOMINICANS, eighteen or nineteen years old, good-looking,
expensively dressed, are playing pool with TWO NEIGHBORHOOD
GIRLS, a little younger, sexy.
CARLITO and GUAJIRO come in. Carlito looks around at the dingy
surroundings and smiles to himself, like a professional sizing
up minor leaguers.
They all look up. Guajiro turns to QUISQUEYA, also Dominican,
a little older than the other three, who is already looking at (xX)
Carlito, suspicious.
GUATJIRO
Hola, Quisqueya!
QUISQUEYA
Eh, Guajiro, man, who the fuck is (Xx! this?!
GUATJIRO
(proudly)
My cousin, Carlito Brigante. You heard of Carlito, right?
Quisqueya looks at the other Dominicans and they BhakS their
heads.
QUISQUEYA
What you need him for? CARLITO ‘Ta bien, okay? Todo bien. Just (x!
came along for the ride.
Quisqueya still looks at him suspiciously.
CARLITO (cont/d) (X!
Hey, I’m just his cousin, man. No big ting.
(opens his jacket to show he has no gun)
Check me out. See? Nobody gotta get tough today.
GUAJIRO
Come on, you know Carlito, man. He used to be partners with Rolando Rivas. Just got outta Lewisburg.
Now their eyes light up with recognition.
QUISQUEYA
Oh, Carlito! Yeah, sure, I heard of you, man! You use to run skag with Rolando, right?
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CONTINUED: 2 12
CARLITO
Yeah, little bit.
DOMINICAN 1
"Little bit!" "Little bit," thass a good one! Joo guys were the fockin’ kings, man!
Carlito shrugs modestly as the other four Dominicans crowd
around him, near the pool table.
Quisqueya puts an arm around Guajiro, who takes the money out
of his pocket and hands it to him. Quisqueya takes it and
leads him over to the bar.
QUISQUEYA
You don’t mind if I count it, right?
GUAJIRO
It’s all there, man.
QUISQUEYA
I’11 count it anyway.
AT THE POOL TABLE,
the game resumes. One of the Dominican’s Girlfriends smiles at
Carlito. He smiles back. Her Boyfriend doesn’t like it, and
puts his arm around her possessively.
Carlito’s eyes are darting around the room, taking in
everything. He looks across the way, to a small door that
probably leads to a bathroom. The door is just slightly ajar,
the light on inside.
CARLITO
(heading for it)
That the bathroom? (Xx! One Dominican, who is wearing mirrored sunglasses, hurries (x!
ahead of Carlito and cuts him off before the bathroom.
DOMINICAN 1
Uh -- the bathroom -- hey, the (Xx: bathroom don’t work. Sorry, man.
Carlito finds the Dominican’s response odd. He nods and heads (X)
back to the pool table.
CARLITO
Okay. I can wait another week. (X) They laugh at his joke, a little too hard. He takes out a . (X)
pack of cigarettes. We see there is a pack of matches Staak tA
the plastic wrapper of the pack.
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Carlito looks over at Guajiro and Quisqueya, who are huddled at
the bar, deep in conversation.
He looks back at the Dominican Kid, who avoids his gaze.
Carlito thinks. He turns the pack, hiding the matches from the
Dominican Kid.
CARLITO
(to the Dominican Kid)
Got a match?
DOMINICAN 1
Sure, man.
The Kid pushes back his jacket to reach into his pocket for
matches. As he does, Carlito notices the glint of the butt end
of a gun tucked into his belt.
One of the four Dominicans playing pool wanders over to the
jukebox, drops a dime in, and picks a song.
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CONTINUED: 4 12
AT THE POOL TABLE,
Carlito sneaks a look over to the bathroom door again. There
is a shaft of light coming. under it, just a sliver, but it’s
enough so Carlito can see shadows moving inside, a pair of
feet. Waiting.
Carlito looks away, stiffening, mind racing. He shoots another
look over to the jukebox. The Second Dominican reaches behind
it and adjusts something, turning up the volume.
Loud. Like to cover something.
AT THE BAR,
Quisqueya is counting the money, very slowly. He looks up at
Guajiro and nods over to a soda cooler at the end of the bar.
QUISQUEYA
You want a beer, hermano? Help yourself.
Guajiro nods and heads down the bar. Quisqueya keeps counting
the money, with hawk’s eyes.
QUISQUEYA (cont/’d)
So, how’s your boss, man?
GUAJIRO
He’s good. Saw him this morning.
QUISQUEYA
You mean you didn’t hear the news?
GUAJIRO
What news?
AT THE POOL TABLE,
beads of sweat have popped out on Carlito’s forehead. Making a
decision --
-- he steps forward and cuts in front of one of the Dominicans,
who is about to rack up the pool balls for another game.
CARLITO
Hey, what’re you guys playin’ here, eight ball? Lemme show you a trick shot before you break another rack.
DOMINICAN 1
Hey, man, we were gonna play another game.
CARLITO
Nah, this’1l just take a second.
(X)
(X)
(X)
(X)
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AT THE BAR,
Quisqueya is still counting the money, nearing the end of the
stack.
Guajiro is at the cooler, his arm in up to the elbow as he
searches for a beer.
GUAJIRO
What news? Hey, there’s no beer in here,
QUISQUEYA
(still counting)
Sure, way down in.
(to the Dominican at the
jukebox)
Help him find one.
GUAJIRO
What ‘news?
AT THE POOL TABLE,
Carlito’s moving the balls around on the table, arranging them
in an odd combination.
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CONTINUED: 6 12
CARLITO
I picked this up in the joint, onl (X took me about six months to learn pig ory You wouldn’t believe the kind of shit you get good at when you got thirty years to kill. Okay, these go over here -- gotta make sure everything’ Ss lined up here, make sure nothin’ moves that ain’t supposed to. Hey. You. Mirror mirror.
The Dominican in the mirror shades looks up. (X
CARLITO (cont’d)
Help me with this, will ya? (Xx
AT THE BAR,
Quisqueya is counting the last few bills.
QUISQUEYA
You mean, you didn’t hear the news
about him?
GUAJIRO
Come on, man, what news?
‘AT THE POOL TABLE,
Carlito puts the cue ball on top of a piece of chalk and (X}
another ball, near the side pocket, on top of another piece =
chalk. He’s giving the Dominican in the mirror shades
instructions.
CARLITO
You gotta put your finger on top of (X) the ball there. Yeah, right on top of it, there you go. Now, I’m gonna hit it, and you gotta press down on it, kinda tight, or you’1l wreck the whole trick. You got it? Don’t let it move. You got it.
The Kid nods I think so, bending down, holding his finger on. (X)
top of the ball. Carlito turns to another Dominican, on his’
left.
CARLITO (cont/’d)
Hey, you gotta come in a little (X) closer. Keep your eye on the nine ball in the corner there. You watchin’ it? You on it?
The Dominican nods. They’re both where he wants them to be, (X)
and Carlito now has a perfect view of the bathroom door,
reflected in the mirror shades. Carlito looks up and smiles.
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CONTINUED: 7 12
CARLITO (cont’d)
You guys are gonna love this. (Xx
AT THE BAR,
Quisqueya counts the last bill.
QUISQUEYA
Your boss is dead. So are you.
Everything happens at. once. The Dominican at the soda cooler
SLAMS the sliding silver door shut, CRUNCHING Guajiro’s elbow
and trapping his arm there --
-- Guajiro SCREAMS in pain --
-- the door to the bathroom flies open and the KNIFE MAN who
was hiding inside flies out --
-- Carlito WHAPS the ball, digging under it, sending it flying
into the forehead of the Dominican in the sunglasses =
-- the Knife Man cuts Guajiro once across the throat and buries
the knife in his back --
-- Carlito WHAPS the pool cue across the face of the Dominican
next to him, stripping him of his gun as they both hit the
floor --
-- the Girls SCREAM and bolt from the room ~~
-- and Carlito FIRES. He SLAMS a shot into the Knife Man
before he can turn, sending him flying against the wall, and
another shot through Quisqueya’s teeth, killing him. The money
drops to the floor and Quisqueya drops on top of it.
Carlito scrambles across the floor, along the length of the
pool table. The Dominican he smashed with the cue is out cold,
but the other two Dominicans that were playing pool,’ including
the one he hit with pool ball, have their guns out and are
after him. Carlito FIRES four shots at them as he crabwalks
for the bathroom.
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Huge chunks of splintered pool table fly up, somebody SCREAMS
and goes down, and a SHOT ZIPS across Carlito’s back, grazing
him, cutting a line through his jacket. He reacts to it but
continues on, diving over the body of the Knife Man and into
the bathroom.
13. IN THE BATHROOM, 13
Ger itte kills the light and scrambles across the floor, into a
stall.
A few more SHOTS are fired in the general direction of the
bathroom, but nobody seems about ready to charge into the
darkened room.
Carlito flips open the gun he got from the Dominican and dumps
the spent shell casings, which PING across the tile floor.
CARLITO
(shouting)
Maricones! You little fuckin’ (X}
maricones! I’m reloaded, come on in
and get me!
He looks down at the gun. The cylinder is still empty. He
flips it shut as noisily as possible and closes his eyes. He
takes a deep breath and works himself up into a rage, like a
lion roaring.
CARLITO (cont/d)
You don’t wanna come in, mother
fuckers? Then I’m comin’ out! I/m
gonna blow your fuckin’ brains
out! You up against it now, mother (X}
fuckers, you leavin’ your balls on
the fuckin’ barbed wire this time!
You thing you’re bigtime?! You/’re
gonna fuckin’ die bigtime!
He stops abruptly, listening, to hear if they’re still there.
Silence. He touches his back, comes up with blood on his hand.
CARLITO (cont/’d)
(screaming again)
Okay! You ready out there?! You (X)
all gonna die here now, maricones,
now, NOW, Now!
Still nothing from outside. After a few seconds, he crawls to
the door of the bathroom and looks out. He can’t see anything.
He waits a few seconds, then crawls out into the dark room.
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THRU OMITTED THRU
23A-24,. 2nd Rev. 2/16/93 (Pink)
IN THE MAIN ROOM, 18
Carlito edges out the door, waving his empty weapon here and
there frantically. Nobody there.
He peers out into the barber shop. Empty.
Satisfied they're gone, he hurries over to Guajiro's body. He
is clearly dead.
CARLITO
(softly)
Oh, Jesus. Jesus Christ. Fuckin! look at you! You said they were friends, God damn you, there ain't no friends in this shit business!
A SOUND from the street startles him. He looks up, realizing
he's still not safe here.
He gets up, goes to Quisqueya's body, and kicks him over
roughly onto his back. The money is on the floor, spotted with
blood. Carlito turns back to Guajiro, looking at him sadly,
reluctantly.
CARLITO (cont'd)
Adios, primo.
He scoops up the money, stuffs it in his pocket and hurries out
the door.
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